Peer Review

3 Responses

  1. Keyry Alvarez-Carcamo
    Keyry Alvarez-Carcamo / 5-26-2013 / ·

    I must say I really like how your project is coming along. You have such a unique set up to your website which is very interesting and I like it. I also enjoyed the kind of story like quality you have set up with your interviewee’s story. I think you’re headed in the right direction. I am sure once you are able to incorporate sound files, pictures, and more of her story it will be even better. Good job so far. I cannot wait to see the rest.

  2. Nerina DiSomma
    Nerina DiSomma / 5-26-2013 / ·

    Jesus,
    The way you organized the site is impressive. Your incorporation of a Spanish quote really added to the page’s character. Other pages would benefit from this addition. I would also recommend a few pictures or perhaps an audio clip. I also find your template very aesthetically pleasing. It was smart to “freeze” the oral history page to ensure the reader starts at the beginning of the oral history. Good job!

  3. Lourdes Najera
    Lourdes Najera / 6-3-2013 / ·

    I really like the way that you organize this and especially appreciate the tabs at the bottom of the page as you move from section to section. You should go through your writing to make sure it’s smooth but it looks great otherwise. I especially like the way you begin your story with the mango tree!

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